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Post by timmyrocks on Oct 24, 2007 12:14:07 GMT
Oh my wow! Those are brilliant. So cute... the second one is my fave! ;D
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Post by onthestage on Oct 24, 2007 22:32:41 GMT
Bit more than a drabble as I'm no good at keeping things short But it was fun to write anyway! Patience: Tim fidgeted in his seat, growing more impatient as he watched the seconds tick by on his watch. He glanced over at Gavin, clipboard in hand, looking ever so professional in his shirt and tie, eyes focused on his boss. To anyone else he appeared to be taking in every word, nodding and smiling in all the right places. To Tim, though, it was clear his patience was wearing thin. The tell-tale signs of frustration - his left knee bouncing slightly, his fingers tapping the clipboard oh so softly. Tim stifled a yawn, rubbing his eyes and blinking at the harsh light he hadn't noticed before. "Sorry if I'm keeping you awake Timothy," Mr Brittas apologised, clearly not meaning a word of it, "I know you and Gavin have a very busy evening planned but this is rather important I'm sure you'll agree." Tim smirked at Gavin as he blushed furiously - knowing full well Brittas had no idea just how busy their evening was going to be. Their whole night in fact, Tim grinned, if all goes to plan."Now, onto section 46 of 75 - What to do when confronted by a large animal in the swimming pool or changing room area." Tim closed his eyes and sighed, mentally preparing himself for the longest staff meeting in the history of..the whole of history - So far. Who knew what to expect when Mr Brittas was about.
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Post by catherinewinner on Oct 25, 2007 2:37:37 GMT
awwwwwwwww!! I loved your fic onthestage!!! It was great! And Yeah I have a heck of a time keeping them short! Please write more!!
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Post by timmyrocks on Oct 25, 2007 10:39:09 GMT
That was FANTASTIC, onthestage! I loved it! And don't worry about your fics going longer... I know it's suppose to be a drabble but I think longer fics are better anyways!
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Post by onthestage on Oct 26, 2007 20:35:43 GMT
lol thanks! Maybe if I split it in half it could be two half-finished drabbles instead
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Post by timmyrocks on Oct 26, 2007 21:12:49 GMT
HeHeHe! Could be!
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Post by inkling on Oct 28, 2007 11:55:41 GMT
Catherine: Very cute, and it does sound a lot like Tim and Gavin and things they'd do and think! But you really need to proofread, even if it's short. On the stage: I love it! So good.
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Post by inkling on Oct 28, 2007 12:07:31 GMT
He sat in his study, his fist hurting from where he’d punched him in the jaw before throwing him out of the house. His passport was in front of him on the desk, and he tapped it against the blotter with his good hand, harder and faster each second. This would not do. He just couldn’t be here anymore, with the constant visits, the constant jaw clenching, teeth grinding visits. The damage to his property. His stress levels just wouldn’t take it anymore. If he’d had his way, he’d have hit him over the head with a handy fireiron. But patience. He’d have the satisfaction of revenge one day. Patience.
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Post by timmyrocks on Oct 28, 2007 13:16:50 GMT
Ooooh this is very clever! You didn't say who the characters were... does that mean we have to decide for ourselves?
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Post by inkling on Oct 28, 2007 13:19:35 GMT
Well it's someone plotting revenge on Brittas.
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Post by timmyrocks on Oct 28, 2007 13:47:53 GMT
Yeah... I got the Brittas part. I thought maybe Gavin cuz Gavin punched him in an episode... but... would Gavin have it in him to do something like that? And then I thought maybe's just a random made up character.
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Post by inkling on Oct 29, 2007 1:20:32 GMT
I think it's someone like that guy who actually emigrated because of Brittas and then sent him spiders.
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Post by timmyrocks on Oct 29, 2007 11:43:31 GMT
HaHa yeah! That would make sense. ;D
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Post by catherinewinner on Nov 6, 2007 23:10:33 GMT
Inkling: that was really good...do we get a second part at all?
And I apologize for my errors in my fics. -_-
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Post by inkling on Nov 7, 2007 0:03:38 GMT
A second part? Um, I didn't plan to. Use your imagination on the revenge. Actually I think it could be the guy who sent him the spiders anyway.
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